I kept it under the lid,
tight and safe;
silent effervescence, water- trapped
in a green bottle with a blue marble .
A summer child’s longing eyes on the codd-neck,
lining the old man’s box- shack,
after cricket on a sweltering afternoon;
déjà vu.
The bottle pops and explodes,
fizzes...
the sour outpourings of the soul
corrosive on the lips.
Thumbs up ...😜😀
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