I waited
for the bait
patiently,
at the bottom-most bowels of nothingness
where days drag by sluggishly,
days laden with frozen hours,
hours dripping with laboured minutes,
minutes with plodding seconds...
Lure me with
a restive thought,
an unfinished tune,
or even a piece of shattered pain
fading away from memory,
release me
from this deadening numbness...
Catapult me
from these desolate depths
like a stone,
that i may feel
the smothering air,
and scatter across the skies
a handful of broken stars...
വളരെ നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്. സ്വന്തം ചിന്തകളുടെ നക്ഷത്രശകലങ്ങളെ വാരിവിതറുന്ന ഒരു അനുഭവം .....
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful.. I loved the restoring force in that catapult
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteGreat
ReplyDeleteI can feel it
ReplyDeleteThe numbness
Through the crack somewhere
It sprout
Then spread its roots
Engulfing my heart
Slowly at first
Then tightened its grip
As if greatly in love with me
Had taken the Vow
Never to leave me
Never to let loose it's hug
Till eternity..
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DeleteThe quarantine bird is on it's wings...
ReplyDeleteBottom most bowels.... And the following images filled with me an eerie feeling. Very good!
ReplyDeleteThis was beautiful, Alicen.
ReplyDeleteThank you Meenu :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and apt for the times we live in
ReplyDeleteThank you Meera :)
DeleteSuperb dear
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DeleteSoul-searching...
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ReplyDeleteIt's so touching dear... brought me away from the files..a great escape**
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DeleteIntense and promising. The imagery of the concluding stanza is stunning. But the first stanza, specifically the bowel line will benefit from some editing or rewriting. Congrats, Alicen, and best wishes.
ReplyDeleteThank You for critically commenting on it :)will definitely look into it.
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