Saturday, August 3, 2024

Departure

The soul takes leave of the body,

half-mangled by life.

Sorrow sweeps over in waves,

rising to a crescendo,

then ebbs like the tide.

The grief remains,

like a dead weight

around one’s neck.



What is it about death

that leaves one

pensive or subdued?

Is it the pockets of absences,

the anguish of unspoken words,

or just the shocking

ephemerality of life?

8 comments:

  1. Good poem pointing to the mystery of death

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  2. Beautiful poem! Captures the lingering numbness of death perfectly.

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  3. Even when we are hanging on 'half mangled by life', there is something about death that stupefies and subdues you. Enjoyed reading it.

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  4. Mysterious one.. Enjoyed reading this one!

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